Ok, good - in this review you have definitely started to analyse the design and techniques used to bring the story to life... this is exactly what you must do for each of your reviews :) On a technical note, make sure that your quotes are italicised, but not your reference after the quote. Here you only need the author's surname and the date, so for example (Crowther, 1947) It would also improve the appearance of your writing if you did not centre it - go for the 'justify' option, to make it look more bookish and less like a verse.
Finally, just double-check the referencing guide to make sure you are including everything you need in the bibliography - http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/Harvard-Referencing
Hi Josh,
ReplyDeleteOk, good - in this review you have definitely started to analyse the design and techniques used to bring the story to life... this is exactly what you must do for each of your reviews :)
On a technical note, make sure that your quotes are italicised, but not your reference after the quote. Here you only need the author's surname and the date, so for example (Crowther, 1947)
It would also improve the appearance of your writing if you did not centre it - go for the 'justify' option, to make it look more bookish and less like a verse.
Finally, just double-check the referencing guide to make sure you are including everything you need in the bibliography - http://community.ucreative.ac.uk/Harvard-Referencing