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Sunday, 11 January 2015

More detail story.

This is a more detailed version of my story with a few changes to it from my talk with Phil. Just to note this is a outline of the story and not all of this will be shown.

An Advanced Technology age where humans are still alive, yet with the ability to travel in space. The human race has still not come across an alien species. Believing that there are no aliens, as they have been space travelling for 1500 years and still not seen one, they never worried about the earths defense. To help ships exit and enter Earths atmosphere humans built space lighthouses too help direct ships in and out of Earth. These lighthouses use their light to guide the ship through space and to avoid crashes. They also were once used for search and defense posts but after 1200 years searching, humanity gave up this search for alien life. After this, the lighthouses just became a signal tower. The Control Centre Agency that owns them created a livable  atmosphere with tree, grass, river and basic animals.

Mark Rider joins up with the Control Centre Agency to learn how to operate and control an advanced lighthouse facility at the age of 17, by 19 he was able to go work in one. His only fear was that it was one personnel per lighthouse, but within 2weeks of being able to work the government changed the rules and made it that it has to do two people per lighthouse as space travel has increased. Mark is put in the lighthouse that is based over the north pacific ocean and is keep in orbit with this ocean.

Within arriving at his new job location, he is meet by Jane Star. The first woman to have worked at this lighthouse ever and had already been there for a year on her own already. With this her personal skill were pretty much at non-existing. Throughout the two years they worked together they got very close. Jane told Mark how Christmas day was also her birthday and how her family would have got a real tree, but since shes been at the light for two years she has not had a real one.

On 18th December 4015 Mark wanted to surprise her with a real tree, so he checks that there is not supposed to be any ships flying in or out his area for the next four hours. He leaves her asleep and goes to the forest to cut down a pine tree. When he is half way done Mark hears a noise from outside the dome, by this time it is too late... A strange ship crashes in to the lighthouse and explodes.

Mark blaming him self for Jane's death joins up straight away for the space marine corp to help fight off the what would be yet to come of the alien ships with out warning as they had taken out all the lighthouses at once.

Finishing the first year of training at the top of his class in hand to hand combat and advanced flying. Due to how well his first year went his second year of training Mark was picked to be part of an advanced unit that would deal with the aliens head on once they arrived.

On December 25th 4018 the first alien ships attacked, Mark was the first group of fighter pilots to go up and fight. Surviving this fight and many more fights, the alien's attacks increased. But with every flight the marines pushed them back, till July 22nd 4021 "The day the sky went dark". This is when the alien mother ships came to Earth.

This fight went on for a few days, Mark when up to fight from day one. Once what was left of Marks fighter squad ran out of fuel, they switch out squads. As soon as Mark squad was refueled they were sent back up to help the other squads. All but one mother ship was taken down. With just one left looming over the plant all pilots left headed straight for it. The mother ship took down all but 20 of the fighter pilots, one being Mark. The pilot with the most experience realized that this mother ship is the lead one and would not be able to be destroyed without a big explosion, but without having any missiles, all they could do is crash in to it. Letting the other pilots know this, they all agree that it is they only chance they have to save earth.


Mark is flying towards the mother ship, you see him look down at a picture stick in his window and says "we'll soon see each other again". At this point the camera changes to a distances view of the space ships flying towards the alien mother ship, just before you see the space ship hit the mother ship the screen goes dark and a second later you hear a explosion and then a machine noise.

Thursday, 8 January 2015

Maybe a start to my story.

Plot

Year set - 4015

An Advanced Technology  age where humans are still alive, yet with the ability to travel in space the human race has still not come across an alien species. Believing that there is no aliens as they have been space traveling for 1500 year and still not seen one they never worried about the earths defensive.

Basics around - Mark Rider

Background info - 

Mark rider fell in love with his high school girlfriend Jane. Once graduating they both found jobs in there chosen fields of study. Jane being a kindergarten teacher and Mark being a machine techie. For a couple of years these two people saved there money for a wedding and house. A few years past they got married and also decided to buy a lighthouse with a house attached so they could live be the sea, which Jane loved so much. 

Jane love Christmas so much it means every thing needs to be real. This includes the tree (but mark normal buys a fake tree and its cheeper) now they live by a pine forest she want a real one.

Story/plot

• Starts with a in space fight battle over earth.

•You see the main character (Mark) in a space ship flighting against some wired alien ships.

• He is amongst the last left of fighters.

• He looks down at his dashboard and see an old photo of him with a girl (Jane)

• It flashes back to 2 years ago

• You see Mark and Jane moving in to there new home, a lighthouse

• it flashes forwards to their Christmas 

• Mark puts up a fake tree and Jane ask him to go out an cut down a real one from the pine forest near by as she has always wanted a real one.

• as Mark is trying to fine the prefect pine tree when he hears a noise, a noise he's never heard before.

• its gets louder

• he see a object flying through the sky, but he then realised it was not flying but falling.

• he stands and watches as he never seen any thing like it

• the spaceship crashes into the lighthouse (through the light of the lighthouse and then into the live area of it)

• Mark runs to the light house, it's all in flames and destroyed 

• you see Mark drop to his knees. And from above you see more spaceships entering the atmosphere 

• Mark joins up with the space core to help fight of the aliens. 

• you see a few images of him training and a few battles

• then you see him fight again the mother ship. 

• they look like there going to lose

• all 20 of the fighter ships left agree to crash in to the mother ship hoping that their ships engine drives like create a big enough explosion to brake the ship up.

• you see Mark look at his picture. And just say "Jane, I've stopped what happened to us from happening to other people and now we will soon meet again"

• the camera switches to a far away shoot and you see the fighter ship about to hit and the screen goes dark 

• you hear a explosion and the a strange machine noise.

•the end

Some Feed back and thought would be nice :)