tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930252795026175746.post5877931024160632804..comments2023-05-09T11:39:28.773+01:00Comments on Josh Audsley-Smith: More detail story.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10227767585829808966noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930252795026175746.post-68682026618149433632015-01-14T00:00:23.437+00:002015-01-14T00:00:23.437+00:00Hi Josh,
Okay - so you've got on minute and a...Hi Josh,<br /><br />Okay - so you've got on minute and a whole lot of backstory to deal with; in order to further diagnose the strengths and weaknesses of this story, you should commit to a step-outline - keep the detail to a minimum - just show me how you intend to get all that content on screen and available to the audience:<br /><br />http://ucarochester-cgartsandanimation.blogspot.co.uk/2015/01/fao-caa-year-1-from-script-to-screen.htmltutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com