tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930252795026175746.post2633332915480510321..comments2023-05-09T11:39:28.773+01:00Comments on Josh Audsley-Smith: Black NarcissusAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10227767585829808966noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5930252795026175746.post-15571443553190472472014-11-19T06:47:22.107+00:002014-11-19T06:47:22.107+00:00Hi Josh,
You have made some pertinent observation...Hi Josh,<br /><br />You have made some pertinent observations here :) Try and keep your tone academic sounding though... 'a bunch of sexually frustrated nuns', for example, sounds a bit chatty; a group of nuns sounds more formal.<br />Also, try and introduce your quotes, rather than just plonking them in - an easy way to do this is by using the author's name, so for example, <br /><br />'Michael Mirasol notes that, “Even the absence of color and use of shadows serves a purpose that would make any horror movie lover proud, once Sister Clodagh and Sister Ruth have their final face-off.” (Mirasol, 2010) <br /><br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com